Doing something with my life... (12)

1 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-27 16:14 [Del]

Okay I decided to make anime videos as a full time job. I'm serious. I just genuinely want to know if I'm doing a good job at it. Sorry if this looks like shilling but I could use some legit criticism.

https://youtu.be/w-fTQ_aFWDk

2 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-27 16:59 [Del]

zoom out camera&change your outfit

3 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-28 07:51 [Del]

saturated market

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6 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-31 00:15 [Del]

Good overall but I will offer some feedback. There are two clips which should have... enh... a second or two cut from them. Those clips are the "like this video" joke, and the joke where you are reading the book. You just hold an awkward pose at the end and you should have just cut off those seconds, it doesn't really add anything and is a bit cringey.

The history lesson might have gone a bit overboard considering the point you were trying to make. If you're trying to make this a full time job you should consider mainstream appeal. Most people don't care about the background of WWI even though I get it's part of understanding Dadaism, I feel that you could have summarized it in a much more succint way. If you were trying to hit 10 minutes for ad revenue, maybe look for another path, as I think many people would just tune out during "boring history lesson."

Finally you do this thing when you talk, where you kind of shake your head a lot, I noticed this in the "conclusion" clip where it was just you talking for a minute or so at the end of the video. Yeah I think you should try to just keep your head still. It's kind of an odd and distracting tic.

7 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-31 02:55 [Del]

>>1
Are you really a poster from here? I managed to sit until the video ended and even learn something. Plus you have more stylish haircut and clothes than anyone I've ever seen in real life has got.

Criticism will be about fonts. 3:02 is classy. Stick to that serif typeface and slight shadow, or something else simple and readable, and do it consistently in all your timeline. Avoid the forced meme look of 5:50 and 6:04.

Get rid of that intro please.

And thanks for not corrupting the colors like modern trendy video post processing staff often does.

8 Name: Anonymage : 2019-01-18 08:03 [Del]

You might get some inspiration from this guy: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCI91jQdeMzuQRgg4VOSZZmw.

9 Name: Anonymage : 2019-01-24 20:48 [Del]

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10 Name: Anonymage : 2019-01-24 22:56 [Del]

I wouldnt open up with puking lol

11 Name: Anonymage : 2019-02-10 09:12 [Del]

>>10
This also looking to improve technical issues or content issues for that matter is irrelevant because as >>3 says. You need to lure trafic to your channel. If you get a loyal fanbase of around 2k people and post 2-3 Vids per week you could get revenue. But that's not as easy as it sounds I guess. Anyway, I can't comment on the content since the puking put me off and thought it unfunny and that discouraged me from watching the rest.

12 Name: Anonymage : 2019-10-15 13:45 [Del]

Anyone under the age 50 will almost certainly see the US collapse in their lifetimes. You can't even be sure now if the US will last another year.

One could understand why those who are 70 might want to keep their head down, but any American who is 20 or 30 or 40 and is not resisting or making plans to leave the US is insane. Everything is illegal. You have nothing left to lose.

Terrorists, dissidents, and seasteaders are all targets. There is no escape. You might buy some time by moving to another country, though.

Some say protesting doesn't work, but Americans protested the Vietnam War and the war ended. Americans are too cowardly and depraved now to protest US wars in Afghanistan, Syria, Iraq, Niger, Yemen, and Somalia and the wars continue.

How can Americans justify paying taxes for US wars, debt, and tyranny? Does your conscience bother you at all?

The cowards who bitch about the US collapse online now are no better than the disgusting American sheep who only care about drugs, alcohol, bread and circuses, sex, music, movies, sports, and celebrities.

The US government is not legitimate today. You wouldn't feel guilty if you didn't pay the Crips or the Mafia protection money, so why should you feel bad about not paying taxes?

The US is a police state and you want to buy a fishing license? WTF?

You know that the US is completely doomed when the USA is a bankrupt warmongering police state, but Americans only care about slavery reparations, free college, and homosexuality.

Voting doesn't work because candidates won't stand up for freedom, the voters don't demand freedom, and the election machines can be hacked.

In a a free country, there are lines that you do not cross. Free countries do not have checkpoints, nanny state laws, TSA groping, censorship, protesting bans, gun bans, NSA wiretapping, indefinite detention without trial, extrajudicial assassination, forfeiture, and torture. The USA has crossed all of them.

Do you think the debt will decline, the wars will end, and the Bill of Rights will be restored on their own?

The US stock market will implode, guns will be banned, there will be starvation, there will be dead bodies in the street, Americans will start sabotaging government equipment, government workers will begin to worry if they will come come home at night, Americans will become kamikaze pilots and suicide bombers, there will be death camps, there will be a Civil War, and WWIII will break out.

The government can't help you. The government is destroying you.

The real heroes today are those resisting tyranny like Assange, Snowden, and Manning.

Americans need to wake up and start becoming fanatic about freedom immediately.

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