Doing something with my life... (11)

1 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-27 16:14 [Del]

Okay I decided to make anime videos as a full time job. I'm serious. I just genuinely want to know if I'm doing a good job at it. Sorry if this looks like shilling but I could use some legit criticism.

https://youtu.be/w-fTQ_aFWDk

2 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-27 16:59 [Del]

zoom out camera&change your outfit

3 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-28 07:51 [Del]

saturated market

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6 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-31 00:15 [Del]

Good overall but I will offer some feedback. There are two clips which should have... enh... a second or two cut from them. Those clips are the "like this video" joke, and the joke where you are reading the book. You just hold an awkward pose at the end and you should have just cut off those seconds, it doesn't really add anything and is a bit cringey.

The history lesson might have gone a bit overboard considering the point you were trying to make. If you're trying to make this a full time job you should consider mainstream appeal. Most people don't care about the background of WWI even though I get it's part of understanding Dadaism, I feel that you could have summarized it in a much more succint way. If you were trying to hit 10 minutes for ad revenue, maybe look for another path, as I think many people would just tune out during "boring history lesson."

Finally you do this thing when you talk, where you kind of shake your head a lot, I noticed this in the "conclusion" clip where it was just you talking for a minute or so at the end of the video. Yeah I think you should try to just keep your head still. It's kind of an odd and distracting tic.

7 Name: Anonymage : 2018-12-31 02:55 [Del]

>>1
Are you really a poster from here? I managed to sit until the video ended and even learn something. Plus you have more stylish haircut and clothes than anyone I've ever seen in real life has got.

Criticism will be about fonts. 3:02 is classy. Stick to that serif typeface and slight shadow, or something else simple and readable, and do it consistently in all your timeline. Avoid the forced meme look of 5:50 and 6:04.

Get rid of that intro please.

And thanks for not corrupting the colors like modern trendy video post processing staff often does.

8 Name: Anonymage : 2019-01-18 08:03 [Del]

You might get some inspiration from this guy: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCI91jQdeMzuQRgg4VOSZZmw.

9 Name: Anonymage : 2019-01-24 20:48 [Del]

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10 Name: Anonymage : 2019-01-24 22:56 [Del]

I wouldnt open up with puking lol

11 Name: Anonymage : 2019-02-10 09:12 [Del]

>>10
This also looking to improve technical issues or content issues for that matter is irrelevant because as >>3 says. You need to lure trafic to your channel. If you get a loyal fanbase of around 2k people and post 2-3 Vids per week you could get revenue. But that's not as easy as it sounds I guess. Anyway, I can't comment on the content since the puking put me off and thought it unfunny and that discouraged me from watching the rest.

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